Saturday, 26 September 2015

Final Narrative Idea



  • Intoduced to the three male characters, older guy (leader), younger guy (main character), middle (psychopathic)
  • Show how the younger guy is a good person, with a family, just got caught up with the wrong people
  • They are planning a robbery, decide on a house, scope it out, make sure its empty
  • One night they go in, are in the process of robbing the house when they hear a noise and see the girl who's house it is, she's seen their faces
  • They run and catch her, take her to a warehouse
  • Tie her up and have to decide what to do with her
  • Younger guy wants to let her go, middle wants to kill her, older guy unsure
  • They argue and fight over what to do
  • Older guy decides to kill her
  • Take her out to the woods to dispose of her
  • Younger guy lets her go to the surprise of the others
  • They are forced to chase after her
  • She's running away in the woods
  • She's escapes and goes to the police
  • Only tells them about the older two guys, leaves out the younger guy
  • They get caught and the younger guy escapes



  • 1st act

    ·      Introduce characters
    ·      Show families
    ·      Planning robbery

    2nd act
    ·      Them doing the robbery
    ·      They see someone in the house, meant to be empty, saw there faces
    ·      Run after her and capture her
    ·      Take her somewhere and tie her up to decide what to do

    3rd act
    ·      Montage
    ·      Debated what to do with her
    ·      Arguing
    ·      Punching each other
    ·      Gun to the girls head
    ·      Gun to everyones head
    ·       
    ·      Final shot of her in a chair and them all around her


    ·      They might know the girl


    EL
    EJ
    AF

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